Storyboard and Audience Response

Through peer feed back we discovered our story board was a level 3 with 12 marks. We were given the improvements to add more transitions, more variety of shots and clearer dialogue in order to gain further marks. We made these changes and added colour and detail before submitting the final version.

Through adding clearer dialogue we found our audience were more intrigued and sounded more interested in the plot and wanted to know more about the storyline itself. This was a positive outcome as it meant we knew the plot and how we had planned to shoot the opening was appropriate for the audience to enjoy.